Real Enough - Update 1

I've made a good bit of progress on the song "Real Enough". Most of the verses are written and I have an initial version of the bridge written. Here are the lyrics so far

You're in the room
I know you are there
I stop and stare
The fire in your eyes is real enough

I see it in your eyes
I feel it in your heart
I see it in your eyes
I feel it in your heart

You want to dance but I don't know how
And when I try
The stepping on your feet is real enough

I see it in your eyes
I feel it in your heart
I see it in your eyes
I feel it in your heart

You don't know why I act this way
When I act this way
The look upon your face is real enough

I see it in your eyes
I feel it in your heart
I see it in your eyes
I feel it in your heart

Some people think that I'm insane
I wonder if you feel the same
I hope you believe that I am real
Or at least real enough

You're all alone and love is not around
And it gets you down
The pain that you feel is real enough

I see it in your eyes
I feel it in your heart
I see it in your eyes
I feel it in your heart

I come around and try to smile
It's a sad smile
my hand upon your shoulder is real enough

I see it in your eyes
I feel it in your heart
I see it in your eyes
I feel it in your heart


I made some changes to the first two verses in order to make the number of syllables in the lyrics match the beats and rhythm of the song. Other than that I'm just making progress on finishing the lyrics. Here is a recording of the initial demo and the version I have so far.

Real Enough - Initial Demo by tazthecat

Real Enough - Second Version by tazthecat

Enjoy,

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